วันศุกร์ที่ 5 ตุลาคม พ.ศ. 2561

12 tenses in one paragraph

2018-10-06

Samutprakarn had been being an industrial city of thailand when I born. My parent had moved to Samutprakarn then they got jobs here. Sometime I cried and disturbed them while they were working their job. 
I  am writing this homework, after I have woken up. I have been writing this homework when that cat is meowing. I like the cats however I am allergic to weather, included cats.
It will rain. I will be lying in the bed, while it will has been raining by the next monsoon season. But I will have left the job, before I will act like that, LOL.

2018-10-06

แก้แล้ว ที่ถูกต้อง คือ:

When I was a baby, after I had played by the afternoon, I used to sleep through the night, while the night security guard was working. I had been sleeping since early evening, when my mother woke up at 4 A.M. I have been living in Bangkok since I became a teenager. I am living in Wattanā district, so you can meet me in the metropolis. I have resigned from my last job and will go to apply for a new job soon. I will have applied for a new job by next month. I will have been working for the new job at least 1 month by January 2019.

ก่อนแก้:

Past: When I was a baby, I was sleeping through the night, after I had played by the afternoon. I had been sleeping since the evening, when my mother woke up at 4 A.M.
Present: I have been living in Bangkok, since I became a teenager. I am living in Wattanā district, so you can meet me in the metropolis. I have resigned my last job and I will go to apply a new job soon.
Future: I will have applied a new job by next month. I will have been working with the new job at least 1 month by January 2019.

หลักการวินิจฉัย:

When I was a baby, I was sleeping through the night, after I had played by the afternoon. (ผิด เพราะ past con ควรจะต้องกำลังเปรียบเทียบกับอีกเหตุการณ์ด้วย) I had been sleeping since the evening (ไม่ควรใช้ The เพราะให้ความหมายเหมือน this), when my mother woke up at 4 A.M. I have been living in Bangkok, since I became a teenager  (ไม่ควรใส่ comma หน้า since). I am living in Wattanā district, so you can meet me in the metropolis. I have resigned my last job and I will go to apply a new job soon [I have resigned “from” my last job “,”and I will go “(to)” apply “for” a new job soon]. I will have applied a new job by next month (apply “for”). I will have been working with (ใช้ for ไม่ใช่ with) the new job at least 1 month by January 2019.


ไม่มีความคิดเห็น:

แสดงความคิดเห็น